That. Holy moly is that a filter word or what? Yes, by gum that it is.
That is a word that shows up for no apparent reason other than that it litters our daily dialogue. That is a word that many others say that needs to be addressed. That’s the whole truth, that I know to be true. I did that search that out of curiosity. Surely that’s not a word that I over use right? 1239 incidences of that. That cant possibly be used that inappropriately can it? Or as filler? Nah. One day down and I removed 187 useless that’s and an additional 287 words that tagged along for fun. Huh. That’s insane that is.
In a document of 123820 words that 1239 isn’t so bad. Well that is bad when I’m burning the candle at both ends, trying to get that word count down below that mark of 120000. And generally that is a filter word, so if that’s not necessary, it should go. Sometimes I find that it’s easier for me to determine how necessary that word is by reading that sentence out loud to myself.
For example:
“I don’t think that this is a good idea.”(9)
“I don’t think this is a good idea.”(8)
“I thought that I would need a match to light that candle.”(12)
“I thought I would need a match to light the candle.”(11)
Girls love that about him.(5)
Girls love about him.(4) – No that ‘that’ needs to stay see not all of them are clutter.
Sasha said earlier that day that Cal was a jerk. (10)
Sasha said earlier that Cal was a jerk.(8) – Better and this would work
Earlier Sasha said Cal’s a jerk.(6) – Much better, I would go with this.
They were told that they would be tested.(8)
They were told they would be tested. (7)
I get that writing is a reflection of yourself and that your voice is your own. I’ve heard others say that by taking out words that they use regularly or normally that their writing style is being compromised by that. I have learned that how I write is how I write. I learned that when I write better, that it’s still me, only better. That’s simple right? (67) (10 that’s)
FYI this is how I would fix that one (Not that I’d put that many that’s in that to start with). Oooh that is kinda fun to do that on purpose. Anyway… back to removing that and the useless words that that brings.
I understand writing is a reflection of yourself and your voice is your own. I’ve heard others say by taking out words they use regularly or normally, their writing style is being compromised. I have learned that how I write is how I write. When I write better, that it’s still me, only better. Simple right? (56) (2 that’s)
Okay so I would probably trim that up more but for this purpose that made my point. I didn’t take all of the ‘that’ out either.
I have used 87 incidences of ‘that’ in this post of 642 words (not including the title or feature image). See how easy that that is to interject a that or two? I know you noticed because I pointed that out from the beginning.
My advice about that.
Take a second look, you might not need that that after all.
-Sheryl
For fun, I looked at my blogs and here are the eight that had ‘that’ in the title. I’m not going to link them all, WP doesn’t like that, I’ll link the first three.
It’s funny you said that…
That is disgusting
The ‘been there done that’ people
Did you smell that?
That sounds right
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That’s another reason I write poetry because that automatically makes me cut down my words….. I think my block comes from being told that I have problems with my sentence structure?? If I concentrate too much on what I am writing then it won’t flow right. To be honest I don’t know what sentence structure is. I don’t want to submit my work to be analysed in case it puts me off writing altogether 😳😊
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I make oodles of mistakes when I write. The trick is to not worry about it until later when revising.
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THAT is amazing! That makes such a difference 😉 Thanks for the great post.
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Thanks, I’m glad you liked it.
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That’s a nice way to work that candle in! (9)
Nice way to work in the candle! (7)
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Thanks for reading and commenting. I’m glad you liked it.
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I commented right after that last one but I see it didn’t post. Here it is:
PS I love what you did there with the word count ‘that’ is awesome. 😉
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That really opened my eyes. Thank you
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You’re welcome. 🙂 Thank you for reading.
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Advice which can’t be reinforced enough. I have become much more aware of that word lately.
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Thanks, its one I’m still working on… sigh.
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Great advice. Looking back on some of my writing, it looks like I might unconsciously be that kind of writer. I’ll keep an eye out of that kind of thing next time. 🙂
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I still do it, even now. I only catch this stuff in revision. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Love it! Weird thing is I don’t use “that” a lot when I talk so I normally go back to sentences and add “that” to make it sound written instead of talking. I will have to review and make sure I don’t add that unnecessarily 😊 Thank you again for the advice, Sheryl. 💖
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I’m glad that you found that helpful. Thanks for reading.
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I use that a lot and I should change that. As an non English speaker that seems to come up a lot 😀 So thanks for that advice.
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I’m glad you found it helpful. Thanks for stopping by and commenting.
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This is the sort of thing that keeps editors employed. And the reason why writers need them
🙂
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