Side Notes
I’ve been gone for a bit, sorry about that. There was a reason and I do have some news I think is fantastic. I have finished my newest book and have begun the primary revision. I’m very excited about this story and can’t wait to share some information. I’ll be composing a tentative query letter for it soon and I’ll post about that process as I’ve done a whole bunch more research on the subject.
For me, the writing process for this story became very involved. My writing time is limited (Full-time job + a family + summer = busy me) so when it came to writing I was deeply engrossed in the new story.
While I write, I often have thoughts or ideas. Whether they are yet to come or they are things to add or even things to change. I try not to go back while I’m in ‘writing’ mode and change things. For one, it throws off my groove and for two; I might change my mind before the story is done.
So, what do I do about the little or big ideas that pop into my brain? I make notes. I keep a pad of paper at my desk at all times. The more detail the better, I write down the idea and my reasoning. There is nothing worse than going back to see “Make the tablet a pen and pad of paper.” If I forget why or the significance I could make mistakes in the change or lose the great idea because of lack of explanation or supportive information.
Here are some things I might jot down
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A clever line or two of dialogue
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A foreshadow for something ie. “Go back and foreshadow Belfast knowing about Lex”
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Change in character name, behavior, quirk or appearance
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A reminder to go back and add a quirk to a character
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Location change idea
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Add a character in
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Notes to remind me to check whether or time of year ie. when is sunset in July or when do daisies bloom.
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Add an interaction or moment in
It’s actually a brilliant idea. I find this idea invaluable when it comes to character development, or regarding a pet. I had to go back and edit the cat in Blindsided. I’d written she had one, then when chaos hit, forgot what happened to the cat throughout. Several chapters along, I realized, I’d forgotten to mention the cat and since he was important to the character, it had to be revised because she wouldn’t continue on without him. Or he wasn’t that valuable at all and what does that say about her, easy come easy go? Not! If you have a pet, they become part of the family. I felt silly when I realized what I’d done, but it was an easy fix in the end. A few lines of dialogue here and there so the reader knows she’s not a scatterbrain and the pet mattered, didn’t just drop off the face of the earth. PS Great your back and might I say, hopefully you’ve had a wonderful time. The new book has you excited and thrilled, so I’m thinking it might be better than the last??? All the ideas, thoughts, are fresh in your mind so it flowed easier I’m betting. Kudos!
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Thanks, it was nice to try to enjoy what little summer we had this year. The book is very exciting. Different from what I normally do and in first person POV. It needs a lot of work before it will be ready to submit to agents so I will post updates and tidbits as I go along.
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I’m sooooo excited for you yeeehaw lol
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Curious now what you have written? I’m looking forward to it.
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It’s a new adult novel with a bit of a darker side to it. I’ll hopefully be posting updates on things like the synopsis etc and the process. I’ll be submitting to literary agents in hopes of a publishing deal.
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Looking forward to it
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Good points as usual, especially on foreshadowing and names! I am reading a serial right now where I think one of the secondary characters changed names midscene! I was so confused wondering where Benita had gone and when Brinda got there? Also in that scene the main character is wearing a black dress and in a previous scene had a black suit on then in a later episode says she doesn’t wear black. Little things that are easy to miss as a writer but to the reader can be so jarring.
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Thanks.
Continuity is a huge issue for a lot of writers. It’s why I have many proofread my work and I read and read it and make notes. Notes are helpful because sometimes as the writer I can glaze over and not notice. I’ve read a lot of work with so much wrong it made me wonder if I was reading the rough draft! Yikes.
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Congratulations on finishing your new book! Excited for you!
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Thank you, It’s exciting but now the real work begins.
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True, but you’re up for the challenge! You’ve been preparing since you started your Blog, you know how to market! 🙂
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Dang but I’m so excited for you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Awww thanks.
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You are welcome. Good things are coming your way, it’s in the air.
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EXCELLENT OVERVIEW OF THE PROCESS—SOMETHING SIMILAR HAPPENS WITH BOOKS OF POETRY (I HAVE ONE…PUBLISHED.).
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